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    Deutsches Heer Somewhere in Libya on a hot summer day .....







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    Uhh! that really looks hot! A fantastic scene on that first image..well done
    There's some great looking characters and landscape you've done there, that adds to the whole scene.
    (what happened to the scale on second image? The 109 looks small compared to the motorcycle. On that angle I think if you let the cockpit of the area of the plane almost fill the image frame, it had looked better in size)
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    The sand and rider look great. How did you do all those tire tracks?

    I agree with Nils. There seems to be a scale mismatch between the aircraft and the bike rider. I also think the pilot looks a little small. The 109 was a very tight cockpit.

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    Mark06GT- Painted in PS.

    Slice the entire displacement map:



    Improved second picture
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    You know what, I actually really like this one composition wise, you did a splendid job on that

    Also the sand looks really good, nice use of displacement!

    Minor crits:
    -Spend a bit of time on the border between the sand and the cliff face, it looks like a hard line now, I'd imagine sand running up it in the corner.
    -Texturing wise, add some breakup to the uniform colour, is just a flat colour now and could really benefit from a subtle noise. -The cliff face itself is missing some smaller detail, some pebbles or sharper edges, it's very uniform now.

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    Much much much better Wojciech! That really changed the whole image.

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    Agreed. Much better.

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    Great shots.. Congrats!

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    Looks great Kliment! The character especially looks good.
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