messerschmitt bf 109 F-2

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messerschmitt bf 109 F-2

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Messerschmitt bf 109 F-2. Hptm. Grasser kommandeur III/JG 51. Russia winter 1941/42.
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Reminds me of my IL2 days some 20 years ago.. lovely!
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Its a nice portrait of the 109 Kliment.

Looks like the pilot is enjoying the scenery as he cruises along.
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Nice weathering work on the textures and the overall image. Some comments you might want to either address or look into for your next piece:

- The plane itself is missing specular/reflection, it looks very matte.
- The fog is a bit confusing, perhaps put some solitary trees more to the front sticking out of the fog. Now it looks more like the sky is just flipped vertically and brushed in with a soft brush. It helps to look at a smaller version (thumbnail) of the image, if it makes sense there it will make sense in a larger version.
- The lighting on the plane does not match the lighting in the background.
-- The light is way too dim, the plane is underlit.
-- The shadows very sharp (give your light an actual size, don't use point lights, to make the shadows softer the further you go away from the casting object).
-- The light color (yellow) doesn't match with the background (orange).

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