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fox51
06-27-2006, 5:25 PM
mustangs ,my angel forever ...

fox51
06-27-2006, 5:30 PM
more.........

Pablo_nemesis
06-27-2006, 5:43 PM
Very nice artistic render, i like the first one the most.

Lucas
06-27-2006, 6:23 PM
Great work:), however, the bombers above seem to spoil the composition a bit but that's just my impression.

mrys
06-27-2006, 8:02 PM
Looks very, very good! My vote for the first one!

Airborne
06-27-2006, 8:09 PM
Nice job with it, the two aircraft look great. I agree, first one looks better

bazze
06-27-2006, 8:46 PM
very nice but I like our previous renders of this model better:
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=310443

kevjon
06-27-2006, 10:09 PM
Nice work, you've improved you aluminium finish a lot from past renders.

My only crits is the chin intake on the model looks off compared to the real Mustang and makes the aircraft look a bit strange for that reason.

I like the third one best, the first looks like both aircraft are about to collide.

Spinner
06-28-2006, 5:47 AM
One of those two guys is the Wingy and is likely to be just a bit behind his leader.
I agree, someone better do something smart quick in the first scene.
Hmm, if you add the bomber stream (logicly present) then they're adding to the Mustangs' story where n why they're flying. Bringing the bombers in almost forces a German aircraft to be where the 'tangs are heading.
I like them.

digiartist
06-28-2006, 10:04 AM
Very nice work, such a beautiful aircraft. Your natural metal finish is very convincing! I like the compostion of the two 51s in shot 3 best for the reasons Kevjon mentioned but I prefer the palette of the first image.
There is something that doesn't quite work with the bomber stream I feel. Maybe they need to be angled a bit more or maybe you need some at different heights as I think as they are they kind of crop the image because they run parallel to the top of the image.
Anyway, just my thoughts. Without a doubt its a cracking image and deserves a header IMHO!:)

krazycolin
06-28-2006, 10:38 AM
nice. very. the bombers feel wrong i believe for the simple reason that they are all angled the same. (or so close as to be difficult to tell). the smoke trails even for the ones in the upper left are all pretty much the same size... they should be of different widths. i'm not sure, but i believe that bomber wings didn't fly in a box formation. it was more of a diamond. (ronnie???) your metal finish is great. i prefer the first one for color but the last for comp.

Lukem
06-28-2006, 1:08 PM
I prefer the last one, for the same reason as given by Kevjon - great image!

Would it help if the bombers / bomber con-trails were toned down a bit? Just push them back a bit, so they don't interfere so much with the two mustangs? (Sorry if anyone's already suggested this).

Skyraider3D
06-30-2006, 10:39 AM
Good work Tim. I agree with some of the comments regarding the wingman and contrails. Colour-wise, go somewhere between "yellow" and "blue" :)

franken_johan
07-01-2006, 9:07 AM
Great renders!

You could apply some nose art with 'Ronnies Competition' or something like that :lol:

kiwi123
07-12-2006, 4:38 AM
Congratulations on getting a header !

Archetype
07-12-2006, 6:49 AM
i have to agree with bazze your first set of renderes looked better

digiartist
07-12-2006, 3:51 PM
glad to see this made the header!

gery
07-12-2006, 4:53 PM
nice work....:)

fox51
07-13-2006, 9:41 AM
hi guys ,thx for your support and comments .;) i will make more good images for you .:lol: