Carrier Launch

[BAKMS]

Hello,

I am still working on getting all the models into the scene I wish. Added the "Shooter"; Yellow Shirt to the scene last night.

Sorry I really did not have time to fine tune the "Shooter"; I hope to get the character fine tuned later.

I still wish to add more. I have about half the model placed now. I still wish to add more characters and a Deck Mule to the scene. The Deck Mule is not finished; but almost there; also wish to add HH-60h, E-2c 2000, and few more hornets.

Enjoy

2075

bA

[franken_johan]

I like this composition a lot! It doen't need much more objects this way. The deckcrew adds a lot of action/motion to the scene.

Perhaps the green guy is a bit too small. But his size certainly works for the impressive Hornet this way.
Lighting could be improved and the concrete structure in the bottom of the picture looks not good (too much contrast). Also dont forget the textures of the jetblast deflector.

Here is a nice reference pic I personally shot some time ago
http://members.lycos.nl/frankenjohan/enterprise_eerste_indrukken/IMG_2654.JPG


Seeing the Hornet from your angle, almost makes me forget the Tomcat...

[Archetype]

you need too increase your lights strength though
it is underlit at the moment
this light setup would work for a cloudy day but the background shows a clear sky

and for the rest the only thing making it look "fake"
is the bump strength used on the deck and the texturig of the characters

[BAKMS]

Thank you the areas I need to work on.

I will see what I can do.

[krazycolin]

hey... this looks... great.... nice compostion... but as archetype says, your lighting is off a bit...

your characters are pretty basic but you know that... the only thing that really bugs me is that the gear is sooooo clean.... as it the rest of the plane(s)... these things are REALLY dirty....

[BAKMS]

I agree the aircraft are to clean.
I will was thinking about dirtying them up after I get all the models in and placed.

All the models are that way. I still got a lot of work.

[Lukem]

Looks great! I can't wait to see it 'muddied-up'.

Should be a brace of Tomcats though....:D